|Reviews for Song Beneath the Song|
| nothing rhymed chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
i don't truly know why but the last three lines depressed me very much, that even while you're flying high, your mark is still upon the ground and it is where you will always lie, even only in shadow. such tremendous feeling. you are quite the craftsman of imagery and i'm never not unsatisfied linguistically or philosophically, but emotionally, there is much pain but still endless humanity to bear witness to. thank you for all your verses.
| VeryIronic chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
This is beautiful. Honestly.