|Reviews for The Sanctuary- A Syoc|
| chaos-tracker chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
Type of monster: feary (not as the disney happy cherry ones)
Special Ability: illusions a person can actually touch and sense
eyes: warm chocolate brown
hair: coal black
eyes: light purple
-thin almost transparent blue butterfly wings
Personality: Has a very cheery aura and loves pulling pranks. She is easily trusted. never turns down a dare and loves pushing her own limitations
Flaws, at least three:
- can't lie
- pushes peoples personal-space
-gets burned and weakened by iron
-can be controled by anyone who knows her true name: Miñodessa
-pranks on others
-having people owe her
-getting pranked on
- changes back into true form when she is gets angry or threatened
- sets many of her illusions around the apartment to freak the other tenants out
-trying out different illusions
-getting people to owe her favors and using them to her advantage
History: Is the youngest of 15 siblings so she hates getting attention. Often went to the human world to escape the siblings and met Tyson. Soon they started hanging out and became best friends.
How well do they get along with others?: She is the person people go to, to resolve arguements. And isn't shy around strangers. Even though she is nice to everyone she has few close friends.
Family: 15 older siblings some half from both the mother and father sides.
What brought them to the apartment: A dare from another faery that said she had to stay in an Iron City for more than 5 years
Romance: i don't mind if she is
Type of monster: regular human
Special Ability: the Sight (able to see past glamour)
eyes: blue green
hair: almost blonde light brown hair
other: tan surfer skin
Personality : He is a tease and loves telling jokes. Loves flirting with everyone. Protective of Erin and will maim you if you hurt her in any way.
Flaws, at least three:
-kind of a player
-always near Erin and overprotective of her
- spicy foods
- sweet things
- people who harm Erin
Habits: Plays with Erin's illusions to bother her. Flirtting with anyone of the opposite gender.
Hobbies: Going on dates everyweek with a different girl. Planning pranks with Erin.
History: Can see monsters in their original forms since childhood and was often bullied for it. Was sent to a Catholic bording school to drive the demons that were in him and ran away.
How well do they get along with others?: He is a very open guy and is good at making new friends, but he likes to keep his private life private from them.
Family: Is the only child.
What brought them to the apartment: He wants to make sure Erin doesn't get into too much trouble.
| I am writer chapter 2 . 7/5/2013
hey I know it has been a long time can you please, update I am looking forward to reading this story and I bet many other people are too.
I am writer
| T.N.M.M.Q chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
Name: Ea Makara
Nickname: Mak-Mak (only his mother can call him that though)
Age: looks 24 but is older than Anchit Greece
Type of monster: Capricorn
Special Ability: breath under water due to gills also crazy high pain tolerance
Appearance: from the waist down he has light blue scales covering his legs and a tail with a fin on it but he hides when he goes out. His feet are goat hoves. From the waist up he is covered in very short white fur (can't tell though). He has shaggy black hair and goat ears and because of reasons he sawed off his horns
Personality: obviously most things he does are on a whim. He doesn't think things all the way through and often screws up. Most humans believe he has mental retardation when he's just the son of the mutant of mythology. He likes to be odd and know odd things and though kind and likes to help he is very disturbing
Flaws, at least three: hard to trust, he can flip his shit out and you never no when, he brings back odd things and is a bit of a kepto
Likes: Ripley's Believe it or Not, strange items, Clam chowder, milk and cheese (only goat though) cultish things
Dislikes: sawing his horns off (does it anyway) talking about his coltishness, Insane Clown Posse
Habits: he is a klepto and bleats like a goat when happy
Hobbies: doing very odd things
History: Being from ancient Greece he was around for a lot of stuff such as the Minotaur and the Labyrinth. Ask what his life was like there and he'll reply with "No fuckin' clue."
How well do they get along with others?: as long as you don't step on his toes (metaphorically) your fine
Friends: he considers most people he knows and doesn't hate his friends even if they hate him but his best friend (Minos) still lives in Greece
Family: mom human dad a goat fish thing
What brought them to the apartment: pure whimsy
Romance: (not understanding question)
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/25/2013
That's one big ass apartment.
| T.N.M.M.Q chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
I know you already posted the cast list but since you have yet to post the first chapter is it alright if I send you my oc? If you already wrote it or are in the process of writing it and don't want to work in another character then please ignore this.
Name: Aasta Lovecraft
Nickname: Heartstopper (only her friends call her that)
Age: 22 (is really 220)
Type of monster: Huldra a norigean maiden with a rotting tree like back and cow tail. Said to be amazingly beuatiful they suduce men (or women because there are male huldras) for their own whicked purposes. If cruel to her she will punish you but if polite she will help you. Huldras also can bend horse shoes touch hot metal and steal babies
Special Ability: like a full Huldra she can make men fall madly in love with her can't do the other stuff can also smell monsters
Appearance: a little short, creamy skin, blue eyes small nose, wavy blond hair cow tail her back does resemble a tree it's growing mushrooms and a chipmunk lives in it
Personality: flirty, any cute guy even if he's in a relationship if she doesn't like his looks and serves no p-urpose to her then she's somewhat mean. She doesn't normally like to be around girls unlss their Huldras. She is maniulative using her look against you. She's also a major heart breaker but there is a chance that she could actually fall in love.
Flaws, at least three: blabber mouth if you're good to her she ay give out info that you shouldn't know and not realize it, cow tail gets in the way a lot it also gives her away, her back there is a freakin' chipmunk living there and it annoys her like crazy
Likes: snowy weather, old barns, forests, playing the love game, old music (sh'es surprisingly a fan of retro)
Dislikes: iphone/pad/nooks that kind of stuff ("It's usless crap you don't need!") hot days when guys reject her
Habits: making her friendship with guys awkard by sleeping with them or doing something else she's likely to do her tail also curls around nearby things
Hobbies: dancing, flute playing, painting pictures on items (like a mother goose story on a lamp shade or trees on plates)
History grew up in the woods of Norigia with her family doing what Huldras do then for the past few years lived in America moving from town to town because she didn't want people to wonder why she was n't getting older
How well do they get along with others?: human wise handsom men are stress releif unattrative guys not gonna bother women strongly dislike kids ignore monsters if she doesn't see them as competition or attrative then there is a chance to befriend her
Friends: most of them are huldras back home
Family: mom & dad 6 sisters and 2 brothers
What brought them to the apartment: she knew they were monsters so they wouldn't care she was a huldra and probably also had an extended life
Romance: I don't understand the question do you mean what their into or yes or no?
| Lightning Berserker chapter 2 . 1/15/2013
Nickname: Kev or Wraps
Age: 21 (a few months older than Viviane)
Type of monster: A mummy-like creature composed entirely of bandages
Special Ability: Stretchable Limbs (To an extent), Limited Shape shifting, Super Strength
Appearance: Kevin has a thin, humanoid shape with slight ape-like features on his limbs. His shell-like head resemble s headpiece from ancient pharaohs, minus the nose and mouth. He wears a skirt-like clothing on their waist, and 2 bandages dangling from his upper back. His body is hollow, meaning hey can store things in his chest. In his bandages are gaps on his wrists, chest and ankles, as well as his eyes, that glow any color, mainly blue.
Personality: Kevin tends to be stoic, prefers to think before acting, and not easily gives his trust to anyone. He also tends to joke to those he trusts his life with. He has a short fuse and doesn't like to be woken up.
Flaws, at least three: tends to be very stoic, very hateful to those he doesn't trust, highly secretive
Likes: anything sweet, non-messy foods, water (in some cases), getting info, and the sun
Dislikes: messy foods, getting stains, getting washed by mistake, water (in some cases), mud, getting ripped, and fire
Habits: checking the electrical stuff, going over the smallest detail in plans, and sleeping where people doesn't go normally
Hobbies: breaking things that need to break, trying to get an early meal, and growing his own apple tree (hidden hobby)
History: Kevin never knew his father and was the man of the house from birth. Both he and his mother lived in a dirty apartment despite being living bandages. Kevin grew up not trusting nearly everyone he met.
How well do they get along with others: not very
Friends: very little
Family: a mother
What brought them to the apartment: to get money for his sick mother
Name: Bayner McGracth
Nickname: Bay, Bay-Bay, Ninetails,
Type of monster: Kitsune (basically a relative to the werefoxes but with more tails)
Special Ability: Creating small fires and illusions for entertainment, or to defend others
Appearance, Hair, Face, body type, eyes etc.: the second picture I sent but with blue eyes, orange hair, claw like nails, and white clothing
Personality: Hayner always jokes around unless it was about something serious. He is touchy about his parents.
Flaws, at least three: attention deprived, not a very good lair, being at the wrong place at the wrong time
Likes: making kids laugh, goofing off, eating
Dislikes: not getting attention, being out done, being lonely
Habits: thinking of new pranks, laughing when his pranks works
Hobbies: sleeping late, pranking, skateboarding
History: Hayner is an orphan with no one to pay much attention to him.
How well do they get along with others?: Well
What brought them to the apartment: For a job entertaining the kids
I pm'ed these two to you, but you forgot them.
| Valkyrie99 chapter 2 . 1/12/2013
Interesting. I can't wait to read the first chapter. :3
| Surviving Devil chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
Type of monster (if it's a monster that I won't know about please explain!):Dullahan (Headless horseman type that kills people and can mark them for death.
Special Ability: Doors unlock when he gets close
Appearance, Hair, Face, body type, eyes etc.( Be creative and they need to somewhat match the creature they are): Long black hair. Carries his head when he's in the apartment, but if he's not in it he wears a cloak and attempts to keep his head on his shoulders.
Personality (Personalities need to match somewhat too): Cold and when someone gets on his nerves he will attempt to throw a bucket of blood on them (That's how they mark who's next to die.) Prefers to be left alone and almost constantly reads.
Flaws, at least three: Weak to gold
Doesn't have his horse
Doesn't have his whip.
Likes: Being left alone
Dislikes: Loud people
Running out of stuff to read
Habits: Sticking to corners Often loses his own head.
History (I seriously do NOT want sad, sappy stories, thank you) Originally he wandered around, traveling from place to place, deciding on targets. Eventually decided to stick to one place, and happened across the apartment.
How well do they get along with others?: Often not too well, unless he's left alone, or the persons quiet
What brought them to the apartment: Couldn't find anywhere else to live
| Lightning Berserker chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
Type of monster: Werefox (basically a fox version of a werewolf)
Special Ability: Changing her appearance when needed.
Appearance: Viviane's physical appearance is that of a young woman with red shoulder length hair, red eyes, dark skin, large breasts, a bushy red tail with a white tip, red fox ears, and a scar across her nose. She wears a black jacket with light pink spaghetti strap midriff shirt and short shorts, along with knee high black and white heeled boots. In her werefox form, her clothes disappear and becomes a human sized version of a red fox.
Personality: Vivianne likes to flirt with both genders, as long as that person gets really embarrassed and she likes that person as a friend. More so with a person she is dating. Vivianne is also easily exited and very happy.
Flaws, at least three: easily angered, over worry when a friend doesn't respond, very perverted, not very good at acting or fooling people
Likes: flirting, rubbing her chest on a person's arm while flirting, reading and cooking when she's not flirting, smart people, mild food, ice cream, licking people's ears, warm weather, making new friends, biting nonliving things, good people, snuggling to smart people who are easily embarrassed, pizza, and fish
Dislikes: getting her tail or ears pulled, really spicy and cold food (unless its ice cream), cold weather, being cold, her chest or butt being touched by people she doesn't know, being called slut due to her personality, bad people, and her friends not responding when she's talking to them in some way
Habits: sleeping in the sun, swimming, sleeping with unperverted people, and rubbing her cheek on people when she's really happy
Hobbies: cooking (especially sweets), sewing, greeting people, and helping kids out with something
History: Viviane grew up in an orphanage with her younger octuplet siblings and helps out the workers there until she got a job at Sanctuary.
How well do they get along with others?: Very
Family: 4 brothers and 7 sisters that are younger than her
What brought them to the apartment: Vivianne is looking for work that involves making people feel at home due to her friendly and flirty nature and cooking skills.
| whovian-halfbloods chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
cant wait for you to update It looks awesome :)
| TempestDragon chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
sorry i had to put the character as a review, but i'm new to this site so it wouldn't let me pm you it
Name: Tempest Elliot
Type of monster (if it's a monster that I won't know about please explain!): selkie (they are half human anyway)
Special Ability: can change from a human to a seal.
Appearance, Hair, Face, body type, eyes etc.( Be creative and they need to somewhat match the creature they are): stormy, bluey green eyes, small, plump, long grey/brown hair that that ripples like the waves.
Personality (Personalities need to match somewhat too): very protective over things and people that are close to her, mainly gentle, but when threatened, very violent. Quite intelligent. Patient, loves the environment and protects it as best as she can. Often does not see the funny side to things others would find greatly amusing, seems a lot older than twelve, kind. Loyal. Feels threatened very easily. Shy.
Flaws, at least three: not a fast runner, easily threatened, often cannot stand up for herself among mortal humans.
Likes: swimming, singing and drawing
Dislikes: people who pollute the environment, people who threaten her and her friends, chocolate.
Habits: not paying attention to important thing, doodling
Hobbies: swimming, singing
History (I seriously do NOT want sad, sappy stories, thank you) was a seal up until she was seven, didn’t realise that she was half human till then, couldn’t read or write until then, got teased a bit.
How well do they get along with others?: very well, unless they offend her
Friends: lots, anyone who you think suitable
Family: both her parents are selkies, but they live in the artic as seals, they thought she should get a taste of human life, her dad is called storm and her mum is called silver
What brought them to the apartment: pollution, the pollution was to strong in the city for her sensitive seal side, she followed the aura of pollution that got thinner and thinner till she reached the sanctuary.
| TheFabulousDuck chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
I can't wait for the story to start! Update soon!
| Valkyrie99 chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
I can't wait to read more! :3 I shall submit one right now. :3
| animemasterall chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
I'll like to sumbit. Could I make two people maybe?