Reviews for Heart attack
Soraibi chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
You gave me a 'hurt' attack...0.0? Anyway, this poem reminds me of my friend's breakup. It was so sad looking at her and then the guy got a new girlfriend which really sickens me ...great poem. I like how the way it started of as "OMG! I am soo in love!" and then the end was like "I really regret it but somehow I'm still in love" . That's what makes it really sad ...
The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
Such a sad and touching pie
ce! I loved it!
Powerful words and a nice feeling!
Keep at it!

The Reverse edge Blade