|Reviews for The Lockdown|
| Chris Linda chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
FANTASTIC! This would make for a great thriller movie! Your a Super story writer. Neither one of us could come up with a story like this in a million years! Love Mom and Chris
| WritingClockwork chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
Kmdkeekwkskdkm! Wow I am so glad I decided to read this! Part of me wishes that it would be longer but it was good enough like this. You really kept me guessing, I did think that Amos was suspicious the 'idiots' are always suspicious. But I didn't think Astrid was FBI although looking back, conveniently knows self-defense? Way too calm? The signs were all there! Lol! I love how you created some tension between Astrid and Amos I guess it was one of the reasons I let my guard down...I shoulda known better!
Great job, till next time!