Reviews for Piranhas
Lia Jenson chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
That's so tragic.

All those mistakes, this IS unedited.

Here:"Coughing up blood, she ((was)) almost there."
"It ((stung))/((stings)) so bad"

I think that's all though, I kinda raced through, just going along with the frantic tone and pacing. That you accomplished, and I congratulate you for it.