|Reviews for Piranhas|
| Lia Jenson chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
That's so tragic.
All those mistakes, this IS unedited.
Here:"Coughing up blood, she ((was)) almost there."
"It ((stung))/((stings)) so bad"
I think that's all though, I kinda raced through, just going along with the frantic tone and pacing. That you accomplished, and I congratulate you for it.