|Reviews for The Dungeon|
| SimonClemens chapter 7 . 10/26/2012
This guy never catches a f***ing break, does he?
This is even more awful to its characters than Shan's freaking Demonata! At least they got time to BREATHE before someone tried an attack on their sanity. But still, the plot of pacing along nicely.
| SimonClemens chapter 3 . 10/11/2012
My oh my, things just keep getting better and better for this guy. Cosmic plaything much?
I see little to no mistakes here despite the lack of beta.
| SimonClemens chapter 2 . 10/4/2012
Now, where'd you get THAT name from?
Also, what a twist! This is why one should only ever read of such occult matters, to entertain oneself and never to actually CALL something. But, desperation does do horrible things to a perfectly good brain. Nice work, I hope it gets more attention.
| SimonClemens chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
That is, um...this is very intricate.
You spares no detail in describing the hellish beasts. Ew.
Also: "this might sound weird, but I swear it laughed." 'This might sound weird' he says. Really, after what he's been describing, that made me laugh.
Is every male villain you come up with a misogynist? Although to be fair, Douche seems to hate both sexes.
Alright, you got me. I'll stay around for the next exciting, (probably gory) installment.