Reviews for Babysitting the player
mydreamadventure chapter 11 . 10/22/2012
I like it but I feel like you could miss some of the words, its hard to explain but sometimes you explain something too much you know? or like you'll say a sentence and just add too many words when it should be said simply like this " I was convinced that today was not a good day for me." you could leave it as "i was convinced that today wasn't a good day" or something but you kind of explain the smallest things in too much detail or like this" I looked up at her and blinked once" you could leave out the once. you know? but i still really enjoy the story line and all that its a good story, keep it up! :)
mydreamadventure chapter 10 . 10/17/2012
haha loved it! :)
7kassie8 chapter 9 . 10/13/2012
update it's really good xxx
Patricia chapter 8 . 10/7/2012
i love your story. please update like now!
mydreamadventure chapter 8 . 10/6/2012
i really enjoyed this chapter, keep it up :)
mydreamadventure chapter 7 . 10/3/2012
haha this is so interesting, but i hate love triangles and the stupid jacob character seems like his going to be an attraction! why cant he be gay whyyyyyyy! haha but dont worry ill still read it because its quite hilarious im enjoying it, keep it up! :)
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