|Reviews for Eating|
| DeVain chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
"Ooh, I think I just cum..." - KATE QUOTE! :D
Darling, I adore the powerful natural imagery that you use in this wonderful poem: "Deep pink of sunsets"!
I think using a "Plum" as a metaphor works brilliantly, it gives the image of something tender, bittersweet, along with the fact that a Plum piercing open actually releases 'juice' and looks somewhat like a vagina. ;)
I like that this poem is multilayered, it isn't just about reminiscing over a certain experience ( :p )!
However, slightly tricky for me to read is this, as your my bff so... :P
BUT BASICALLY I LOVE IT and you really do reveal that you have a wonderful talent for writing in this poem!
Much love ;;;; xxxxx
| Violetviolence chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
I'm a little hot under the collar now - I usually hate plums, but now they seem like, the sexiest thing ever. Everything here is so tense and passionate it's explosive!
| Ophelia Schmit chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
Definitely original. Great work, buddy (WHAT is with me, calling people 'buddy'? I swear, I get it from my dad).