|Reviews for Endgame|
| Pretty Rad chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
The way you just jumped into this without any background story or explanation makes it feels like this is a part of something bigger (is it?). Normally, that annoys me, but you wrote this so well that I actually quite liked it. I wasn't expecting that sort of ending, but I enjoyed that too. A lot. 'Cause I liked screwed up things, which you're already aware of.
I want to know more about these two and their relationship. Pre-death, of course. Or maybe post-death in some weird afterlife world. Haven't seen that done before. Your writing style would probably let you do it fantastically, too.
So, yes. All in all, nice job.
| hotleafjuice chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
I... Honestly really liked this. It's slightly disturbing, probably since I hadn't really expected the ending (and I feel so stupid for ignoring the warnings that I failed to read). But it was engrossing and fascinating. Awesome story!