|Reviews for Its not real, just never ending|
| rust phoenix chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
this is VERY well written. the emotion is intense and conveyed perfectly, and the ending is haunting. great use of imagery and word choice.
| RedemptionIsOverrated chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
I love the imagery, you're a talented writer.
| kaiheitai chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
| Insanity Streak chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
Wow. I really like the first three stanzas. I think it may be because of the tone. I also really liked how you use second person narrative technique to give it a tone of detachment but you could also sense the personal nature of it too. However, I'm not sure about the last stanza. It just... I dunno. I like the first three lines of it, but from there on, I'm not sure what happened. Anyways, I think its a really good piece. I really connected to it. I think it would make a really good spoken word piece. :) xx