Reviews for Unfinished AKA (And Kick-Ass) RPG
TheBloodEdge chapter 10 . 12/16/2012
Okay, so this Mayu is NTRyu. All right. So she became a mute librarian who- Wait, this was mentioned in the second chapter wasn't it? I wonder how her part would tie in with Yukio's and Aki's.

And she deserves a pie in the face! Muahahaha!
TheBloodEdge chapter 9 . 12/16/2012
Hey! This is supposed to be a hilarious parody that doesn't take itself seriously! Gimme back my funny!

But still, that thing that happened to Martha was quite a punch. Yukio knew she'd die and hell, he programmed it but still, he couldn't prevent it. Yeowch.

And what is this shit about Yukio falling in love with Aki? No, the Blood says. No.

Ah Warper, you troll. I don't know if I hate you or love you but you are awesome.
DevilPogoStick chapter 2 . 12/15/2012
Well, got to the second chapter.

Wow, Yukio seems to have quite the problem here. :)

I had to stop to take a look at the games you mentioned and you picked some nice ones. XD

But damn...That had to suck for him given his issues in life.

Keep up the great work!
kingofe3 chapter 4 . 12/14/2012
Daisuke is a muscle bound type of guy, huh? That image of him in a dress makes me cringe.
TheBloodEdge chapter 8 . 12/14/2012
Huh. Some things going on with Zeus and Warper. It feels a little brief and very shady for me to pinpoint just what's going on. I guess I'll understand some other time.

Okay, why does dark lord know Yukio? And NTRyu is now with the dark lord as a maid soldier? And I so need an army of maids...
kingofe3 chapter 3 . 12/14/2012
For a moment, I thought you made a mistake with the he's in the beginning... I was so wrong...
TheBloodEdge chapter 7 . 12/14/2012
Sigh. As the programmer of the game, Yukio already knows friggin' everything. But there are some weird glitches in it for some reason. I wonder what's up? Maybe it's Aki's magic thingie?
kingofe3 chapter 2 . 12/14/2012
Yukio is pretty funny and sadly an unfortune man. Let's hope the lamp will help him!
TheBloodEdge chapter 6 . 12/14/2012
Genies. Sitting around at a bar enjoying the butt monkey getting genderbent.
kingofe3 chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
Poor Aki... those angels will now be lonely. Ha, ha.
DevilPogoStick chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
Finally got me the time to check this...And I found this pretty amazing!

You did a neat set up for the story we're reading and you kind of got me hooked to see more (if I wasn't so busy with errands that is! XD)!

Keep up the great work!
TheBloodEdge chapter 5 . 12/13/2012



That was the weirdest thing I've ever read.

Ahem, aside from genderbending and all that, I was laughing my ass off at the whole thing! Seriously, it's like you just grabbed all the anime and games tropes and just made fun of them until they're an unsociable mess. And it is awesome.
TheBloodEdge chapter 4 . 12/13/2012
Okay, unrequited love subplot is important, let's keep reading!

Hmm, NTRyu still seems to hold feelings for Yukio and though she's engaged to Daisuke, part of me thinks she wants to call it off.

And it looks like they'll join Yukio in... Wherever he went.
TheBloodEdge chapter 3 . 12/13/2012
Akinythimunthosliawerthu... Lolwut?

Gah, I find Yukio's wish depressing and logical. I mean, he doesn't seem to have a job let alone any money. Goodness, 'I want my beloved to be happy'. It just stings man...

Honestly, Yukio's unrequited love is really what keeps me reading. But I guess it won't be too important later on...
TheBloodEdge chapter 2 . 12/13/2012
Heheh, this is porn for indie game enthusiasts.

Okay, I think I feel for Yukio. He was in love with Mayu but his diligence in gaming kept the two apart and in the end, she went for your typical hottie Daisuke. It stings man. Not just for him but for me too.

Until proven otherwise, Mayu has earned the nickname, NTRyu.
84 | « Prev Page 1 .. 2 3 4 5 .. Last Next »