|Reviews for Pack of White River|
| WhiteWolfWoman chapter 4 . 10/20/2012
Ooo, the plot thickens! Will Shade succeed in becoming Alpha? How will Flame cope with the change in his brother? Moremoremore! Pleeeease?
Keep up the great writing!
| WhiteWolfWoman chapter 3 . 10/9/2012
A bit confusing in some places, (Very, VERY fast action) but still good! Keep up the good work!