Reviews for Soap Suds
tolerate chapter 11 . 9/21/2013
I love this one, especially the last line. It's beautiful. The imagery it gave me was a singer standing on an empty stage with no audience, and she holds the microphone close to her mouth and couldn't get the words out. Then everything turns to dark. Your words feel like a proper ending to me.
Wondering Jew chapter 9 . 5/11/2013
These sounds like my snapshots. Have you considered trying something like that?
Wondering Jew chapter 8 . 5/11/2013
Boysboysboysboysboysboysboysboys
Wondering Jew chapter 7 . 5/11/2013
I love writing about the South. It's like a whole other world down here
Wondering Jew chapter 6 . 5/11/2013
Ah the sock eating laundry machine. The struggle of humanity
Wondering Jew chapter 5 . 5/11/2013
I like the shape
Wondering Jew chapter 4 . 5/11/2013
Interesting. Are you going to continue this?
Wondering Jew chapter 3 . 5/11/2013
Marching Bands of Manhattan?
Wondering Jew chapter 2 . 5/11/2013
Oh you and your Ingrid
Wondering Jew chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
I like, but don't understand what a "c hill" is
we've got obsessions chapter 2 . 10/14/2012
"i never dreamt so sweetly as this song."
beautiful finish. it's so delicate, yet it says so much.
just.a.breeze.in.eternity chapter 2 . 10/14/2012
Your poetry is beautiful.