Reviews for On The Question of Sanity
J.B. Rose chapter 1 . 8/14/2020
It's an interesting poem, I like how it gets darker and darker. :)
blank-unused chapter 1 . 2/26/2014
I agree with this person *nods and acts like a genius philosopher eating ice cream*
Sapphy-Sweets chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
Favoriting. This...made my day-no YEAR XD

I can't decide how to review this...it's just one of those poems I'm peft speechless with a smiling face :)

I love this. Good job.

-sapphire
AJSKing chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
While I loved your topic and the way you presented it and appreciate the fact that you were able to maintain a rhyme scheme, the rhythm seemed a bit choppy. Perhaps you should work more toward sticking to a similar line length throughout and working on the number of syllables per line. It might be helpful to read it out loud a couple of times to see what sounds best. And yes I totally can relate, it's funny how when you try to kill someone everyone assumes you're criminally insane, sometimes you DO have a really good reason.
LillyVilone chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
I really like these type of poems! Seriously, this poem of yours is very fantastic. I love the overall idea of it. :)

Keep on writing!
-LillyVilone :)
Naver chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
I think I my have some problems... I was laughing throughout this poem. It's actually real funny!
I've always wanted to be able to write unique funny peoms. Do you give lessons?