Reviews for Five
sapphireshadow15 chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
You know how much I hate romance, Naver, but I truly loved this poem!

...I guess I do like dark romance, which I rely on you to give me :)

Happy writing, friend
-sapphire
Oak Leaf Ninja chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
*hugs*
L.C.Doyle chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
This gives me an overwhelming feeling of loss and pain - quite moving and deep. Thankyou for sharing!
Brianarae0408 chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
There is something so haunting about this poem. I love it!
Starry-eyed Starfish chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
Short and sweet Except it wasn't really sweet... It was more hauntingly beautiful :3
It reminded me of a song for some reason...Or a chant...I don't know why... Maybe you should start songwriting too...
Anyway. It conveyed the feeling of being pushed away and how far that can make you "fall" sometimes.
This is something really weird and definitely not the view you were putting out there, I don't think...
But instead of the literal meaning of falling through glass (( excellent metaphor by the by )) it sounded to me like he/she was falling from earth... Into the afterlife? Or maybe it just felt like the world was crashing/ending around them...Like he/she felt that they were falling into their graves... :O
To me, the reason it was glass was because she/he'd thought that the world is transparent or something...Like it was fake?
It also gave me the impression of falling angels? Is that just me? :S
Anywhooo: Keep wriiiittttiiinnnng :D
damaged crane chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
aaah this was beautiful! an amazing job conveying emotions through the piece. love the description and imagery you used. great job!
SilverTintedMist chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
Wow. So sad:( I could envision this little scene playing out. And I like how it's a little ambiguous as to why the person is drowning. (suicide? murder? accident? Seems to lean toward suicide) Keep up the good work!