Reviews for The Scariest Place You Ever Found Is Inside Yourself
SugarRayne chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
Creepy, but I can't help but feel your friend doesn't know much more about Slenderman than the game Slender. She really should go do some more research into it. The creepypastas surrounding it are fascinating reads, and the stories and films and other things around it are even more intriguing.
Jave Harron chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
Okay, the story was okay. As much a fan I am of Slendy, he seems fairly tacked on to the story. Also, some descriptive language and metaphors could work to improve the work.
Justrockzyxxx chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
Awesome story! Definitely something to be proud of! :)