Wow she's blaming him for everything. For a 26 year old and a lawyer... she is a tad immature. And she couldn't control her 'hormones'... teenager much?
This might be 'understable' if they are teenagers. Sorry, for me her character is unlikeable. I'll keep reading though. Please don't take this as an insult or something.

please update!

this is so adorable :) what happened the night before? gosh

Ohboy did I enjoy that. Thank you :) I love love your writing!

Great story so far. Can't help but to notice that the last post was in 2012, hope you've not quit/ stopped the story; it would be a shame, you had quieta storyline and it was easy to follow. Not underminding your efforts by saying that, it's just that your story is one of those storie that the authur is in full control with little help of the readers. You're not rushing and your storyline and evrything makes sense, it'll be a shame if you leave such a story unfinished, especiallywhen you have the readers in the palm of your hand. I don't know your life and things you do so I can't tell you what to do, so I won't; what I'm trying to do is to maybe gently persuade you to come back :3 :)
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Lots of love a DYING fan.
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great story, I got straight into it it's very addictive, one of my fave books to read on fictionpress. I hope that you can update soon, I'm dying from anticipating what's going to happen between Jace and Evelyn, especially after the HOT-HOT-HOT make up session in Jace's car.

ZNoooooooo I love this story so much! The tension is too much! GASHHHHHHHHH PLS CONTINUE WRITING,!

It is so amasing to read stories about actual grownups, not teenagers. Besides, you write damn well. I really adore the tension Jace and Evelyn have to endure, it is like I feel it myself:) good luck with your projects and time management and I really hope you update soon

hey i was just wondering if you were planning on updating this story soon? im looking forward to future updates :)

Let me just say that this is my favourite story that you've authored. It's very well written. Keep it up with the updates, and don't work too hard! ;)

mandyf13

Hey im tour 100 th review :D
You are doing a good job its a good fiction ! Carry on!

There's about ten more days of November and you'll be done writing but then this story would most likely be the last one you update after your other stories since this is the most recent one. I'm so excited!

Let's just say that was hot. The whole story is hot. The sexual tension and the lawyer stuff with an athlete. Oh my. I can't say that I was glad Evelyn caved in but I'm glad that Jace didn't turn out to be a complete asshole and leave her after her orgasm. I knew he liked her! I was actually expecting her to start tearing up while she made her way back but instead she was happy. I don't know how to feel about that though. It doesn't make sense on one level because it doesn't seem like breaking rules and having fun in life was something Evelyn considered at all. Regardless, I'm excited and dying to know what will happen next. Good work!

Um, I actually live in SF. Since SF has popped up in some of your stories, I thought you've actually been there some time, like live there for some part of your life. But isn't the story set in NYC?

Jace Hartman reminds me of Christian Grey from Fifty Shades of Grey. Not sure how you'd look at this but I loved the Fifty Shades trilogy so it's not an insult of any kind. Jace just has that...domineering, sex revolved atmosphere that Christian also has. And hopefully they both end up finding someone that changes their way and make them settle down.

So far most of what you've written seems like a lot of filler (as in about 4/6 of the chapters) but it's okay because I like it...well, I don't like reading filler, I like reading your work. It's been interesting but I also really like action! Let's get it moving; I would like to see Martin catch Jace and Evelyn making out.

With love,
my princess ending

I noticed that in most of your stories, there's always the sport guy and the girl in band and she's really smart. Starting to think you were in band once. It's cliche but it's cute. :) I'm not sure what to think about for the boyfriend part. I think cheating is completely unacceptable but then again I can't hate Evelyn because it was never clear if they were actually dating.

Jace is a name to die for. It's one of those names that I'm drawn to like Drew and Alex. Like, I don't know what's wrong with me but I'm just in love with the name so to find out Jace is the name of the main character in this story was definitely good news. Evelyn is quite awkward; the name I mean. I have a friend named Evelyn and she's Asian so I hope I won't be focusing on reminding myself that's not her.

It's definitely a great start. There's so much about this story that I'm looking forward to seeing. While I was halfway through to chapter, I was just thinking about all the cute things Jace could possibly do to win her over but when I've reached the end, I truly think Evelyn fucked up with a good reason. So, I'm looking forward to seeing "the hunt" to win her heart...well that's not an appropriate word because I think she's already starting to fall in love. I don't know what I'm saying so sorry, hahah.

My dear, you've come so far! It's been a year since your boyfriend was shipped back to Korea. I'm so glad you didn't completely give up writing and decided to do something boring with your life. Keep it up. :)

With love,
my princess ending

Great chapter! Glad they finally realized there feelings for each other.