Reviews for Touch
PU77 chapter 1 . 2/26
Damn... you are an amazing writer...
FallingDark chapter 1 . 5/7/2015
What's so wrong about people being saved? They die either way. I'm intrigued.
firelass19 chapter 16 . 4/18/2015
Binge reading is so much fun. Read all 16 chapters in 2 days and have officially come to the conclusion that this is freaking awesome.
Omega Good Job! I hope you update soon :)
Revamp chapter 16 . 1/28/2015
Well being a nephallim certainly explains Evelyn's powers with death and such. I have to admit that I sort of saw it coming with the reveals in the last chapter and Draconis' line was a dead giveaway that Evenlyn had to be something supernatural.
What will happen now that Draconis ripped Gabriel away from Ai? What does Draconis even want with Gabriel anyway?
I wonder who decided to show up in the midst of Evelyn and Ryo's little scuffle. This should be interesting in your next update.
Y. S. Wong chapter 16 . 1/13/2015
Ryo's been reading Electricity. Aw yeah bro, someone gots good taste. I bet he's a Kazkura shipper too.

Oh, Jax is a monster. That explains a lot.

I'm surprised the police department doesn't just outsource their work to T Corporation. Would be a lot easier than having to pay Lollipop-san, considering these types of cases probably aren't that common.

No need to be shy, Evelyn. We all know you'd rather call him Zephy-puu than the Reaper.

Update pls.
J.J. LaRoux chapter 16 . 7/15/2014
I really love this story, the plot is very interesting as are all of the characters. I'm sad that Makoto-san died though (really wanted him to survive T.T) I hope you continue with it!

Also, I have to ask, are you a Supernatural fan?
Chiisutofupuru chapter 16 . 6/20/2014
Well, now I'm all educated, and even more interested on where this story is going... can Evelyn conjure stuff out of thin air too? Are there going to be more supernaturals involved now?

Chiisu
Chiisutofupuru chapter 15 . 6/20/2014
Finally realized something VERY interesting about your story, and it is clever!

What I noticed was the fact that you write in both first and third person, but it doesn't really confuse anyone because it is only the 'heroin' that you write in first person. Good job with that. I tend to notice these things quickly but it took me right to the last chapter (or chapter 16) to notice this time.
Too busy enjoying the story I guess :P

Now onto reading about the 'Nephilim'.

Chiisu
Chiisutofupuru chapter 13 . 6/20/2014
All because she won't have a choice? What a guy-errr-reaper.

...I wonder how the battle between immortals will go...

Chiisu
Chiisutofupuru chapter 12 . 6/20/2014
(((Should have put that for-shadow-thing with the gun at the beginning of THIS chapter, though I guess it doesn't really matter)))

Chiisu
Chiisutofupuru chapter 10 . 6/19/2014
Ummm... wow.
Sooo now I'm wondering how exactly Draconis got out of whatever bind he was in and why he acts the way he does. He is so powerful, scary, funny and ridiculous all at the same time! I like how our heroin is avoiding all of this though and how she's taking to it :P

Chiisu
Chiisutofupuru chapter 9 . 6/19/2014
Draconis is interesting. I like how you incorporated the cat talk in there.
A cross-dressing little bro with no shame in doing so? That caught me by surprise, it was good.

Chiisu
Chiisutofupuru chapter 7 . 6/19/2014
One thing after another. So what was 'this' guy's death prophecy?

Chiisu

(I use my "(tilde)" to continue my long pen name for me, lol)
Chiisutofupuru chapter 6 . 6/19/2014
Ah, now she notices :3

You know, Zephyrus seems maybe a little too clueless on how things work. It's not like he's never been to the places she's taken him. I bet he's seen the inside of a store before.
... he does know how people are 'going' to die too apparently, so he should have known about 'theft' I think... but it is kinda funny though.

Chiisu
Chiisutofupuru chapter 5 . 6/18/2014
She's not quite as freaked out as most would be I would think, but then again, she does have a supernatural ability herself...

Wait... he touched her right? Shouldn't she be a little surprised she didn't see his death?

Chiisu
332 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »