Reviews for what if I promise to grind my teeth and tell everyone about it
Your-Magpie chapter 1 . 11/29/2015
"(all time existed,) do you under
stand?"

ughhhhh. beautiful.
please tell me you have your work on a different platform bc i love your work bt im not on fpress v often anymore omg
themanicurist chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
love. it's just something in the words you use. this would be my new favorite, but your hispanic brown eyes is stiiiiill my number one.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
I love how you kept going back to the imageof being "airborn" it made me think that you were desperately trying to escape. The whole disjointed feel of the prose mirrors that as well.

I also loved the last line, its so raw and brittle and fascinatingly original. It's good to see you writing/posting again.

Much love,
Juliet.