Reviews for Choices
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
Why do I feel like I should read this before every party I go to in the future? It's like I know I should drink that last drink but than I do and then I feel bad for doing so. But enough about me...I honestly think that this piece could relate to so many choices we've ever made but I suspect that you intended to make it to be vague; maybe so the reader could get something more personal out of the piece. I think it's good.

I also feel like this should relate to me through every decision not just ones I make at parties (though it's rare I get invited to one!). Also, I feel like the speaker is just as lost or was lost as we can be at times when we have to make choices. But again I think that's to emphasise that choices are vague, confusing and can get you lost sometimes.

Great piece!
True Talker chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
This makes me think and the more I do think the more sad that I feel. I just do.