|Reviews for The Origin|
| ygg chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
I guess there's love and Love. Perhaps it all depends on how much you feel connected to the Love underlying all happiness, misery, birth, death and Life itself, the Love for all that is as it is. Anyhow, an important question! Well written.
| The Moon Howls At The Wolf chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
Great Haiku! The title is a little misleading in comparison to the piece in its entire form (HAHA all 16 words!) but I like hoe its starts of questioning a good concept but ends on a sullen note!
| Thee.Girl chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
| True Talker chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
Please explain. What do you mean that it hurts? I am only asking.
| The Dead Fish chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
I forgot who said this: "Everything that shakes up the soul, is happiness."
| Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
Well I guess love like any emotion is incredibly complex because if it were easy than everyone would love everyone and well real life isn't like that - I'm sad to say. I like to think (this might sound really soppy) but I think love has to hurt so we can make ourselves strong, so we can grow. Just my personal opinion.
I think this is a great piece in that it can provoke so much thought from just three lines (14 words). A great piece and I'm just envious because I can't write haikus as great as yours - in fact I don't think I can write them at all!