Reviews for Inner Torment
HenryDavid chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
I spoke too soon; THIS is your best poem yet.

The message is so powerful; and so potent; I can't even explain in all the ways it is amazing through a review. I'm going to run out of patience.
I'll PM your new account with the rest, but to start:

People care about other people's opinions. It's just a fact.

People are too stereotypical. Me and my whole family have had bad acne at my age; and If I weren't 6'5", 240 pounds; people WOULD make fun of me. It would hurt me; and I see people be mocked for it. People always want perfect faces and bodies... I love flaws in a woman.

People don't connect well with emotions... nuff' said.

My poem details on that too. But thanks; this was fabulous work!
Glad high-school is over!
Tiahna chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
This poem is absolutely amazing. I can relate to so much that it says and it's great to know someone else out there knows what it's like :)
Stonehartdreamer27 chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
Wow... this is amazing. Take it from a girl who has a very low self image in the first place, that this describes everything in just the perfect way.. You're so definitely not alone, and I thank you for writing this. Beautiful...
The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
This raw, brutal piece was well-written! It goes into my favorits for the

sincerety and unpolished emotions put down on paper. You are good at expressing yourself!
You go into my favorite authors' list!

The Reverse edge Blade