Reviews for Royal Runaway
Mitchie Writes chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Oh dear me we do have some work to do with this story. First of all, I'm just going to be blunt, the whole missing-supposedly-dead-heir plot has been done to death. It's not your fault that it is and that it influences your main characters to lean towards archetypes (the naive, weak princess, the rugged warrior, his spunky sister). Try breaking away from what kind of rules you think govern this plot and its characters. Another piece of advice: PACE THY-SELF. I've said it before and I'll say it again, take it slow. Although the plot is borderline cliche, there are some things I like about this story, like the whole guarded-bodyguard relationship between Andrea and Darren. Finally, a not bickering couple (Thank God, they're just so annoying!). I'll keep reading in hopes you put in some twists.