|Reviews for Hidden Betrayal|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
I AM TRYING TO NOT GET A LEGAL TEAM ON THIS BUT THIS TITLE AND STORY LINE IS OWN AND RIGHTS BELONG TO ME THE ORGINAL AUTHOR. PLS REMOVE FROM SITE ASAP!
| truephan chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
Heh-heh, as you can see, I read this newest story. I like how you used the present tense, which made it a more interesting read. Sometimes it was confusing to keep track of all the new/old names. At one point, you had Nate/Ryan saying he didn't know 'Tyler'. To me, this was pure fantasy, but then again, I think that's what romance is. Good job. truephan
| dragonian master chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
Tell me later! It's a true story or no? Tellmetellmetllmetellme!
| Sparklingjewel12 chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
Awww that was so cute! 3