Reviews for Cuts
whisper queen chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
"if life is just a child's game/Then I'm their broken toy." favorite part. Aren't we all broken toys...
Purple Octopus Badger chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
Wow, great piece, I never understood cutting, but I do understand pain, but this was very nice, in the words of Buddy Wakefield "Brutally Beautiful", keep at them :)
Naver chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
"If life is all a child's game,Then I'm their broken toy". My favorite line during the poem. It sums up what I feel must of the time... I see through your poem a person sad and lost with little hope for a joyful life. Is this how the girl feels? I'm new at poetry myself, but I understood the message in the poem and I think you did a great job. I look forward to your writings in the future! :)