Reviews for Gray World
Prim the amazing chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
I like your poem :).
sprinkled clean chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
Well, it's not horrible. Just a bit weird because of the irony in the tone. Like, it's okay that it rhymes, but I think it would have been more angsty if it did not rhyme. The descriptions are okay and actually very sad if you imagine it.