Reviews for Silent Murder
Dingo Vision chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
Huh... I was expecting something scary. Also, the '&' hurt my eyes... Is typing three letters really that difficult?
That aside, it's OK. If I were to grade it as a horror story, I'd give it a B, maybe a B. It would be better if there was more detail based on Aimee's feelings about her last night. She's panicked, so I, the reader, should be able to pick up that panic. Also, I haven't really picked on the drowning feeling, so you should try to work on that. I feel like this whole thing was rushed, which isn't very good for a story, if you know what I mean.