Reviews for Last Words of Not Loving chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
This has a really great rhyming pattern and I can definitely feel the emotion. Really great job.
Naver chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
ah.. that word "expectations.." They always get in the way. An endless ladder to climb. (Ok I could of written a better comment.) I liked the end of the poem better then the beginning. I don't know it felt like in the middle the flow changed and it was easier to what's the word... read.( nope thats not it, oh well) Anyway maybe I imagined it. (I do that) Good poem overall. :)