Reviews for Masqurade
auntcal1 chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Good first poem. This is a very intriguing subject. Also a little dark and disturbing. You know me, loved it.
Omega chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
I found your poem intriguing, to say the least. First off, is masquade meant to be masquerade? That is what I based my interpretation off of. Wings of fire, untouchable, yet always hungry, reaching and stretching towards heaven and towards hell. They are quite the concept. They make me think of angelic demise, a yearning to ascend but a fiery passion to stay where we are. This could be in society. This could be in life. I got that especially in the "smile and wave" portion (love that repetition!) We extend with fire, and we defend with fire.

With our masks we extend with geniality, we defend with pretenses. What kind of person is it, who can truly see through these masks?

Omega