Ahhhhhhhhh! Love it. Your story is awesome. I don't even know how to express how great it was. Definitely one of the best reads I had on Fictionpress. Thank you so much for sharing it with us :)

? 21 is old enough as a consenting adult. This part was weird, she acted like she was a teenager. Isn't Laura only mid twenties? Her train of thought is ridiculous. I like the premise of this story and it has a lot of potential, but it needs to be heavily edited and revised. Laura herself sounds like she is 15.

Man... I loved this story so much. Especially that fluff at the end of chapter 22. I'm not one for much fluff but I still loved it. .

This was definitely interesting. It sounds twisted, but I like that the one that had an abusive past was Gabe because I feel like people forget that such things do happen to males too, not just females.
I wish it had been at least one chapter longer because the end felt rushed.
Good job!

This was GOOD. I got all tense during several of the chapters, and the character interaction between Gabe and Laura is awesome! Thank you for not including lemons, too! It didn't take away from the story at all. It was strange to read about Gabe's past, but very interesting how you maneuvered it.

Rule #1: Never read a prologue. Just read chapter 1 to determine if the story is interesting enough to continue. I read chapter 1 and chapter 2 and chapter 3. Then I went back and read the prologue. Now I remember why I made rule #1. BTW, your story is interesting.

Damn, that was good! I definitely squealed like a 12 year old girl a few times, and this story was definitely epic. I always had to keep on my toes, not knowing what was going to happen text. I loved it! ;D

hehe. Well, I very much enjoyed your story. You have a good mind for characters, romance, humor, and action. I feel like your writing is only going to get stronger and stronger over the years.

That Dragon blurb definitely attracts me... off I go!

AWWWWWWWWWWW! Bestest mind-talk-test ever.

Hahaha! Freaking hilarious. I wonder whether Alex actually thought she was a fake, or thought she was real, and wanted to force them to spend some time together. Don't know enough about Alex yet.

Haha! Funny and intriguing first chapter. Great hook :)

Hi! This was really an amazing read :) You're very talented!

amazing story. amazing writing

i luv it xoxo

how did you get Eyjafjallajökull right because I'm from Iceland and there is no way that you wrote that without google! am I right? but I like this story so far and I like the fact that you wrote anything about my country 3 toodles and luv xoxo