Reviews for Liquid flames
Guest chapter 23 . 10/17/2020
Ahhhhhhhhh! Love it. Your story is awesome. I don't even know how to express how great it was. Definitely one of the best reads I had on Fictionpress. Thank you so much for sharing it with us :)
Susan chapter 6 . 7/10/2018
? 21 is old enough as a consenting adult. This part was weird, she acted like she was a teenager. Isn't Laura only mid twenties? Her train of thought is ridiculous. I like the premise of this story and it has a lot of potential, but it needs to be heavily edited and revised. Laura herself sounds like she is 15.
augmentedDREAMS chapter 23 . 8/16/2014
Man... I loved this story so much. Especially that fluff at the end of chapter 22. I'm not one for much fluff but I still loved it. .
shy green rock chapter 23 . 7/26/2014
This was definitely interesting. It sounds twisted, but I like that the one that had an abusive past was Gabe because I feel like people forget that such things do happen to males too, not just females.
I wish it had been at least one chapter longer because the end felt rushed.
Good job!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2014
This was GOOD. I got all tense during several of the chapters, and the character interaction between Gabe and Laura is awesome! Thank you for not including lemons, too! It didn't take away from the story at all. It was strange to read about Gabe's past, but very interesting how you maneuvered it.
JD Fly chapter 4 . 6/18/2014
Rule #1: Never read a prologue. Just read chapter 1 to determine if the story is interesting enough to continue. I read chapter 1 and chapter 2 and chapter 3. Then I went back and read the prologue. Now I remember why I made rule #1. BTW, your story is interesting.
The-Genius.101 chapter 23 . 6/14/2014
Damn, that was good! I definitely squealed like a 12 year old girl a few times, and this story was definitely epic. I always had to keep on my toes, not knowing what was going to happen text. I loved it! ;D
R. Ficst chapter 23 . 1/22/2014
hehe. Well, I very much enjoyed your story. You have a good mind for characters, romance, humor, and action. I feel like your writing is only going to get stronger and stronger over the years.

That Dragon blurb definitely attracts me... off I go!
R. Ficst chapter 22 . 1/22/2014
AWWWWWWWWWWW! Bestest mind-talk-test ever.
R. Ficst chapter 4 . 1/22/2014
Hahaha! Freaking hilarious. I wonder whether Alex actually thought she was a fake, or thought she was real, and wanted to force them to spend some time together. Don't know enough about Alex yet.
R. Ficst chapter 2 . 1/22/2014
Haha! Funny and intriguing first chapter. Great hook :)
Veronica Fay chapter 23 . 1/22/2014
Hi! This was really an amazing read :) You're very talented!
GraceSaader chapter 23 . 1/15/2014
amazing story. amazing writing
misssmiley03 chapter 23 . 1/1/2014
i luv it xoxo
misssmiley03 chapter 10 . 1/1/2014
how did you get Eyjafjallajökull right because I'm from Iceland and there is no way that you wrote that without google! am I right? but I like this story so far and I like the fact that you wrote anything about my country 3 toodles and luv xoxo
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