Reviews for Over Love and Friendship
FlameintheFlood chapter 1 . 9/26/2006
This was beautifully writen. You deffinately shouldn't have to choose. That is so mean and controlling of ur gf. I mean, doesn't she have friends? and is your friend even lesbian? she has no reason to be jealous. You obviously love her and only her. This was kinda confusing and I didn't really understand all of it. email me at ~Margaret
Ayuru chapter 1 . 9/9/2006
Wonderful. Keep up your writing. I can really relate to this.
Cedes of Grey chapter 1 . 6/13/2006
I've read this several times now and have only just gotten around to writing a review. I'll admit it, I teared up a bit, especially the first time. I sincerely hope that I'm never put into this posistion. I can really relate to it though...I think you did a wonderful job of making the story identifiable, probably because it's your life, but also because you wrote it very realistically and honestly.

"I've always hated my body because it is weak but it reflects my innerworkings. I am weak out as well as in."

This line in particular hit me very hard. I can relate.

I do think some editing would have been beneficial. It seems a bit rough and hard on the transitions. But also, that raw quality really made the honestly of it stand out.

Great Job. Forever one of my favorites.
DiesIraeXIII chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
Friendship is forever.

Your love may dump you, and your friend will be there to pick up the pieces and help you put things back in place.

But a friend who doesn't support you, isn't a friend. Just a burden.
Ingenue Kitsune chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
I love the way you ended it _ I was in the same situation some weeks earlier. I just told my best friend what was going on and explained to her that she was my best friend, nothing MORE, but nothing LESS. She understood. Perhaps your friend would have understood that, too.-Tiff
kawaiwabbit chapter 1 . 4/8/2006
wow. i couldn't even think of what i'd do if i was given that choice. fortunately i havn't had to. and hopefully i won't have to. my love did fell jealous of one of my closer friends. im currently writing my life's story on how i met my first love. when i get to that part in my life where she told me she was jealous you'll be able to see how taht went. that is if you want to read my story but yeah.. it's Forever & Beyond. cheers...Lis
wyllow7 chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
OH MY! That was so... I'm speechless. I would cry if my girlfriend made me choice between her and my bestfriend. I would choice my friend though.
hypocrite extrodinare chapter 1 . 5/21/2005
oh my god... wow... I never had to go through this, but somehow I have an inkling of understanding... my girlfriends have to deal with me lip-locking with other girls... but thats just me... anywhoo, this was awesome! PERFECT imagery...
Flamevixen chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
Very... descriptive. I'm straight, but I think people who are lesbian or gay should be allowed to have happiness. What some people say about homosexuality is very rude. Like the book Walk Two Moons by Sharon Creech says, "Don't judge a man(or in this case woman) until you've spent two moons in their moccasins. This seems to be very well written.
Lady DreamWriter chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
holy Goddess! Are you a mind reader! DAMN, THIS IS GOOD! you will be a wonderful writer, never give up in what you love.
Blind Tragedy Wolf chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
Brought tears to the eyes and thoughts I wish I didn't have to think about to the mind. Overall nicely done and put.
Ellen Enchanted chapter 1 . 5/15/2004
Being queer in such a heterocentric world is hard.
And it sucks.
I almost cried reading your piece...
I'm lucky, I guess, that I've never had to go through that- my [male] best friends is madly in love with me, but he's never told me to choose him over a girl...
Peace,
Ellen
kitten chapter 1 . 2/18/2004
wow...beautifully written. i'm going through almost the exact same thing...i have to choose between my girlfriend and my best friend (i'm lesbian) and it hurts like hell. i have no idea what to do. you captured that emotion perfectly. i wonder if anyone knows what to do...
Nelotizapu chapter 1 . 12/28/2003
A very beautiful and well-writen story. I hope everything worked out for you.
Zilindico chapter 1 . 9/1/2003
Very good. It's horrible when we have to go through such a decision, love or friendship, espeically when both beautiful flowers seem to bear painful thorns. Great personal write.
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