Reviews for Always
Dill Wilson chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
Been there, done that. It hurts just thinking about it and I think you captured that pain pretty well. I can't help but think maybe she doesn't deserve him (even as a friend) or maybe he's stupid to even hang around. I eventually learned to move on and not let myself pine over things that could never be.
physics223 chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
Wonderful! It is both heartfelt and tragic, and yet simple. Well done!

I hope you can review my short story, Torpedoes as well. Thematically it is a bit similar, although it's quite lengthy. Thanks!