Reviews for Infection
walls-have-ears chapter 6 . 11/12/2012
Interesting chapter, looking forward for another update!
freddyburn chapter 6 . 11/12/2012
Glad to see you didn't change anything
Bethany.D.L chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
Great first chapter, I like the fact that you took the time to introduce the characters in detail :) going straight onto the next chapter!

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walls-have-ears chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
Nice chapter, I'm looking forward to the next
freddyburn chapter 5 . 11/8/2012
It's ok dude you didn't include any of mine. Glad to be your beta. And yes, up the rating...
sweenytodd chapter 3 . 11/7/2012
hmmmm I would like to see a bit more emotion from our main man. Other than that, this was a pretty good chapter. It definantly pulled on my heart strings. :( I hated that the kids father had to be shot
sweenytodd chapter 2 . 11/7/2012
sooo short :( but at least I have the the other chapters to look forward to :D ohhh I love uncle jeb by the way hippie power all the way!...too bad for charlie. Lets have a moment of silence..
freddyburn chapter 4 . 11/3/2012
Good chapter, intense.

There is one thing though: If I were you, I would leave out the description of Kurt being naked. Kind of off putting
sweenytodd chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
...LOVE IT! :D yay for juicy zombie stories. I was not expecting much from the first chapter but you wrapped everything up so sweetly and got right to the point. write more soon
freddyburn chapter 3 . 11/1/2012
Wow, this turned out better than expected.
I see you are following the pointers I gave you.
Have to say though, certain elements (other than the zombies) are like my story
walls-have-ears chapter 3 . 10/31/2012
Good chapter - looking forward to the next, also (2) is referencing to Rick Grimes is it not? Update soon!
walls-have-ears chapter 2 . 10/30/2012
Thus definitely seems like an interesting story - so far so good. I like the character description, but I reckon you could improve thus by describing the scenery a little but more - was it cloudy? Was there a slight drizzle? Was the sun blazing hot? Otherwise, good so far - and Daryl Dixon is from the Walking Dead!
Sushi-Sisters chapter 2 . 10/29/2012
This is your first story? Wow. This is soo good!
obik16 chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
I like it. Please write some more soon I'm really interested on how this turns out
freddyburn chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
I like it man. Nice intro. But, then again, I do like zombie stories, so... anyway, will keep an eye on this
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