Reviews for Next of Kin
Pursephone chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
I found it amusing in the beginning, but toward the end it was quite freaky. I think it was the random changing of scenes, and right into the her fright. I think if you wished you could expand on it, make it longer, though that might take away from the awesome ending... Any which way it was pretty cool! Keep the awesome-sauce up!