|Reviews for Wednesday|
| Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
I don't know there just seems something a little off key here. I guess it's just me not relating to it, I found that the narrative was a little weak. In the sense that I don't think that you developed it enough - I don't know I just find that I don't get why she is said when the subject always returns every week. I also didn't understand why the subject never appeared in the last stanza.
The imagery is superb though. I really liked it because you gave names for things such as the type of car. Which for me is great because I know some many people (myself included) who don't name things who just call them cars, trees or dogs.
I do think you are a talented writer and I was merely offering some constructive criticism which I hope you aren't offended by. Sorry but for me this isn't something I can relate to it but maybe I'm missing something? If I am I hope you can fill me in - maybe I'm looking at it all wrong. Anyway you're still a great writer regardless of what I think or say or write!
| True Talker chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
This makes me feel for the one who wrote this. It makes me think.