Reviews for Just A Kiss
Scribble Scribe chapter 3 . 1/11/2013
I like it so far and would very much like to read more. :)
Raquel Brown chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
This is really disgusting...
Mrs. Hutcherson chapter 2 . 11/4/2012
Add more! D;
Gingersnap chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
Hmmmmm not bad. I read over it the other day. You might want to look over it and proofread and such but other than that, not bad. The different POVs gave you different perceptions of what happened. Overall: not bad.
Mrs.Hutcherson chapter 2 . 10/29/2012
It was good, but proofreading is needed. Also, the kiss was filled with passion and longing and I enjoyed reading it. I also liked that it was a flashback sort of thing. Needs some improvement here and there, but good vocabulary. Overall, it's pretty good.