Reviews for We'll rest
sapphireshadow15 chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
Romance.
Ya kill me, buddy.

That aside, this poem is very sweet and all fuzzy. Makes a grumpy person like me smile :)

(I can't believe I just said that!)

Happy writing, friend
-sapphire
Oak Leaf Ninja chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
I like it. :)
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
One do I think of a summer romance when I read this? It's like I can imagine a girl having finished her last day at college and it's summer time and then there's her boyfriend waiting by the gates ready to waste his summer with her. I love it and it makes me feel soft inside. A superb power with beautiful imagery (my favourite line being: "Together with you wrapped in a glove."). Beautiful.
Stonehartdreamer27 chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
This is also very good and well written. You are truly a very talented poet!
Starry-eyed Starfish chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
This was a lot different to your other poems - mainly because it wasn't tragic or dark - but I like it
It was quite peaceful and gentle; for some reason it reminded me of a little stream trekking through a forest on its ownsome :')
Or a sigh. Like someone was breathing out because at last they can rest :)
Delilah Brightman chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
What caught my eye about this poem was the title, it seemed...welcoming...so calm. Such a cute idea for a poem too!
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
Good piece. I think you might me 'Wrapped in a glove' opposed to 'Rapped in a glove'. I really liked the piece. it was really well written. I liked the first four lines:
"When it's time for the last test,
When the school bells ring,
After the last man leaves,
We'll rest."

Lovely piece :-D