Reviews for The Promise
Arthur Wilde chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
I don't know what a Kendama is...am I too old :-(

...but I liked the story. Very cute. And I thought the pace was perfect for it. After all it was a short story.
Anihyr Moonstar chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
I like that in the end the "horrible" thing she was worried about him doing was something ridiculous. It was kind of obvious that it would be, particularly since you very clearly avoided ever letting the audience in on what "it" was until the end, but still funny.

I feel like the pace was very rushed though. The story just skipped from one scene to the next without much depth anywhere and thus it never really felt like more than words on a page (as opposed to a story that grapples you in and holds you there).

- Moonstar, review courtesy of the Review Game's Review Marathon! (Link in my profile.)