Reviews for Something More
Ygg chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
A very well written poem, as if written from the Heart. It is a very familiar theme as it's an existential crisis many of us are probably familiar with, in one way or another. But that is life I guess. As someone once said, life is a mystery to be lived, not a question to be solved.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
I found this very beautifully written, just beautiful but it was also very sad. I felt very bad for you from what your trying to express in your writing. It also evoked a lot of emotions in myself such as sorrow, despair and the feeling of being lost, unanswered and weak. I think's a rather good poem, other then being well written, it's something i think most people can relate to. You a very good writing but also good at creating an "experience" for your readers. Good Job!