Reviews for Something More
Guest chapter 1 . 1/10
You can save yourself. You have so much power & that's why the world is beautiful even in all it's chaos. In all it's chaos you can bring light. The love you carry is infinite because you are it. You are everything.
ygg chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
A very well written poem, as if written from the Heart. It is a very familiar theme as it's an existential crisis many of us are probably familiar with, in one way or another. But that is life I guess. As someone once said, life is a mystery to be lived, not a question to be solved.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
I found this very beautifully written, just beautiful but it was also very sad. I felt very bad for you from what your trying to express in your writing. It also evoked a lot of emotions in myself such as sorrow, despair and the feeling of being lost, unanswered and weak. I think's a rather good poem, other then being well written, it's something i think most people can relate to. You a very good writing but also good at creating an "experience" for your readers. Good Job!