Reviews for Marvin McMagicspell: An Introduction
Ophelia Schmit chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
Not bad, but I would highly recommend trying to attempt writing a whole story for each of these endings. Sort of like this:

-The beginning that's the same for all the stories
-Ending one
-Ending two
-Ending three
-Ending four

It's just a suggestion, though. Don't listen to me if you like where you're going now.

-Hermie