|Reviews for In ieiunio et fletu|
| AquariusGirl230191 chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
Love the latin! I actually knew what Salve meant before I got to the bottom so felt very clever :D
I however, did not have a clue what nolimetangere meant - so thanks for the heads up on that one.
Great use of language, I like the way you use foreign with english, it makes it more interesting to read. I like the line "we must pur iron into our wombs" - great line!
Overall, not much to say improvement wise, as always, it's another fantastic bit of poetry. You did a great job of setting the scene and making it come to life.