|Reviews for The Passage of Time|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
I like this; it's very well written. It's short and simple, yet emotionally engaging. You manage to create characters that are relatable and sympathetic and add in the right amount of the supernatural (I assume that is what it is) so that the piece is mysterious but still focuses on the characters' internal struggle. So far, this is the best story I've read on fictionpress.
| AxeMurderingAxolotl chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
This was a really interesting read- but I was slightly confused by the whole flash forward/present thing (if that's what it was)- but overall it was easy(ish) to separate the two.
Overall I really enjoyed this though- a nice read. I love the ending. Really nice. Thanks :)