Reviews for Daddy's Girl
RainfallSeven chapter 2 . 10/15/2012
It would've been very awkward if he hadn't had an extra pair of glasses. I can imagine having to walk around and only see a blur.
It's sort of wierd that a male main character would have such a long paragraph on make-up. Of course he's not the narrator, but it's through his eyes.
I feel as though I'm getting to know the characters now...
... and I'm wondering how far this girl is going to go!
I actually have a lot of the 'The Throwaways' to read, so I mightn't. I'll try!
TheChaoticOne15 chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
wow. this is a really good story! please update soon!
SugarIsHEALTHY chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
This is really good...It's a really creepy backdrop for it, and it's off to a nice start :)
One thing I thought was that it was a little lengthy in the background of the characters, but I guess you couldn't really avoid that...But good job :)
RainfallSeven chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
Nice start :)
I hope you show the relationship bewteen Sarah Gail and Nathan. I like nice father/daughter realtionships in stories the most for some reason.
I think the descriptions of the relationships in this chapter could've been a lot shorter, and instead showed the characters talking. It's just nice to have some dialogue.
On a random note... poor Nathan
I should probably go read the latest chapters of 'The Throwaways'
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