|Reviews for Phantom's Story|
| Bastard From North chapter 21 . 3/8
Daaamn memory... I can't remember Mia :O
So, Yuuna likes him back after all... Or was that just some kind of good bye thing? :D
I think he shouldn't feel upset of that, Ghassan was person and not hi property after all XD
Great chapter Phantom :)
| Bastard From North chapter 20 . 1/25
Just like Orchid said, leave nothing unsaid :D
I bet the next chapter will be interesting! :O And it
really surprised me that he wants to go with
And who is this mysterious apprentice? :D
Great work Phantom! :)
| Bastard From North chapter 19 . 12/26/2014
Ice sword! O.O I wanna ice sword :O
That would be cool :D
I like Orchid :3 He has a sword and he is bad ass,
no need to say more :D And he kinda has some kind
of pride or honor thing going on :D
Great chapter! :)
| RandomCuriosity519 chapter 19 . 12/21/2014
Well that was a big turn of events.
Taking a step back from the rest of the story I really liked the part with Yuki's ice sword following Orchid crushing the top half, it was written very skillfully, it gave me a very clear, and vivid image when I read it the way you wrote that piece *Round of appluase*
| Bastard From North chapter 18 . 11/17/2014
Orchid, you betrayed me :O
I though the guy was going to be good guy :(
So unfair :D But he has a giant sword :3
I wonder how long Yussel can keep that act up?
Knowing that some one is dead and people looking for that
guy... It can't be easy :/
( Didn't realize this was updated until now :D )
| RandomCuriosity519 chapter 18 . 11/16/2014
:( I already felt bad for Yuki, but now this, Orchid may not know who he is, but that would be downright terrifying
| RandomCuriosity519 chapter 17 . 11/14/2014
It's good that itzal's alive, I'm really excited to read more :)
| Bastard From North chapter 17 . 11/14/2014
Damn, I really need to do something with my memory xD
I can't remember surely who was who but what I think was going on
was that Itzal drank some water that made you immortal or cold dead corpse?
Well it seems he survived :D And the Zak was some suspicious snake boy :D
| Bastard From North chapter 16 . 9/3/2014
Ghassan kinda had it coming, like karma :P But hen again he was trying to fix things if I am right.
And dead can't talk or walk until the hell is full :D Or some one invents device how to bring back dead :P Good luck with that
I wonder how this turns out? :P
Sorry for late reviews, I was kinda lazy :D
| RandomCuriosity519 chapter 16 . 9/2/2014
Yuki writing those numbers in the phone book for Ghassan is going to be desperately sad later on... T.T
| Bastard From North chapter 15 . 8/17/2014
Yes, yes,very interesting chapter, yes indeed yes...
I am not sure why bot that Zak guy reminds me of snake :D Orochimaru?! It must be him! O.O
I think they shouldn't trust the man they just met with water in his pocket, that is an obvious pedophile :D
| RandomCuriosity519 chapter 15 . 8/16/2014
omg! I really hope Itzal doesn't die I think he'll be fine but there is no way to be sure...
Also I really like Zak you do a really good job at creating unique characters that stand out it's got me hooked on this story :D
| MysteriousFire chapter 14 . 4/26/2014
Ghassan is dead? No! He can't be dead! He must come to life again or something!
Itzal just accepting the fact that he'll be a usurper's side kick made me smile somehow xD
Erika! How can you run into that with your eyes wide open? :o
And Ghassan's alive again! Ow it's not him :( It's just a copy cat
Wait, if he's blind, how can he have seen Ghassan's face out by the mine?
Oh nice ending line of this chapter!
| Bastard From North chapter 14 . 4/13/2014
I would never want to live forever, it would just suck :/
I never understood why someone would want to anyway. But I guess you like cliffhangers don't you? :D
| RandomCuriosity519 chapter 14 . 4/12/2014
O_O what just happened? WHY DOES IT HAVE TO BE LIKE THIS?!
The bad guys are getting to large of a group AHHHHHHHHHHH! this is not good, not good at all...Does not compute does not compute XD
It's getting further into plot now, and i thought it was good before :D
Good work, hoping for the next chapter soon!