|Reviews for Phantom's Story|
| Bastard From North chapter 14 . 4/13
I would never want to live forever, it would just suck :/
I never understood why someone would want to anyway. But I guess you like cliffhangers don't you? :D
| RandomCuriosity519 chapter 14 . 4/12
O_O what just happened? WHY DOES IT HAVE TO BE LIKE THIS?!
The bad guys are getting to large of a group AHHHHHHHHHHH! this is not good, not good at all...Does not compute does not compute XD
It's getting further into plot now, and i thought it was good before :D
Good work, hoping for the next chapter soon!
| MysteriousFire chapter 13 . 4/11
And now he's lying to her to convince her to break up! This is sad :(
Why isn't he asking Ghassan about the accident in which his mother died? He could find out the truth! Then again, I disagree with the trance he put on Ghassan and the way he's using him!
He wants Ghassan to kill himself? He wants to take away Yuki and Mia's father? YUSSEL HOW DARE YOU?
Ghassan can resist? And is he dead now? Darn you phantom! Mayor cliffhanger!
| MysteriousFire chapter 12 . 4/11
I love Mia! She's cute.
Also I like the conversation between Yuki and Ghassan. It's so casual but at the same time there's more to it. I also recognise a lot of phantom in it ;)
Itzal and Erika are a cute couple
Wait, she has red eyes? :o
Aw they break up because he's scared of what Yussel may do to her? :'(
| MysteriousFire chapter 11 . 4/11
I do find Rena's power way more useful than Yuki's!
And Itzal can turn people into... robots... or slaves... or something. :D I like superpower stories so much
Yussel? What are you planning to do?
| MysteriousFire chapter 10 . 4/11
"Heights are what keep you up at night because you're afraid of falling off the bed." Okay, Rena just turned into one of my favourite characters :D
I just realised, Rena does look a lot like Jen here! (and you know which Jen I mean)
Well I guess the only reason why Yuki is no superhero yet is because he doesn't have enough courage XD
And why exactly are they breaking in to Yuuna's room? I bet she won't like it when she finds out...
I like the Wall of Quotes! :D
Time stopped? What powers does baby One (or Five) have? Stopping time? :o
| Rita Arthurs chapter 4 . 4/8
Oh dear...so Ghassan finally confessed...I wonder what will happen now...
| Rita Arthurs chapter 2 . 4/8
Nice. I'm wondering what Ghassan and Ottilia will do from now on
| Rita Arthurs chapter 1 . 4/8
I was curious when I first read the description of this story. It seemed like an interesting idea. I like the beginning so far, it holds a promising storyline
| Bastard From North chapter 13 . 4/5
That kid is really scary, just goes on killing people like that even though the killed guy was a murderer. And even watched it! Or maybe he had to since it was his power after all. Ghassan, you're mind is strong, well was so good that you creeped him out :D
This story just caught me off guard, keep it up like that! :)
| RandomCuriosity519 chapter 13 . 4/5
Darn, i thought there was more than i had last read, but alas there is no more added
Hope you add more soon, it's great so far :)
| RandomCuriosity519 chapter 12 . 3/29
No! don't break up with Erika because of Yussel ! That's sad :(
I liked the way you described how Yuki's life is at home and how they all get along together.
The scene with Itzal was flawless there wasn't a line i didn't like
Also i want to compliment your amount of description and thought process i felt it was significantly better :)
| Bastard From North chapter 12 . 3/29
I don't know about you but I had grown do dislike any person in drunk, I just don't like drunken so much :P I don't hate smoking at all but the drinking isn't much of my thing :D
This surely is an interesting story :) Keep up the great work!
| Bastard From North chapter 11 . 3/1
I am not sure which is more scary, that some one is able to stop time or some one is able to control you :O And all of those have number in they're back :D
Really good chapter :)
| Bastard From North chapter 10 . 2/12
No! Why more secrets and the the chapter ends? Why every one tortures me with cliffhangers!? Why?
( In the fanfiction, one certain author had a habit to make nasty cliffhangers ) :D
I learned new word! :D Religious, I guess it means something about believing God or something?
Rena can stop time? That is really cool!
I wonder what Yuki thinks now :D