|Reviews for Phantom's Story|
| Bastard From North chapter 20 . 1/25
Just like Orchid said, leave nothing unsaid :D
I bet the next chapter will be interesting! :O And it
really surprised me that he wants to go with
And who is this mysterious apprentice? :D
Great work Phantom! :)
| Bastard From North chapter 19 . 12/26/2014
Ice sword! O.O I wanna ice sword :O
That would be cool :D
I like Orchid :3 He has a sword and he is bad ass,
no need to say more :D And he kinda has some kind
of pride or honor thing going on :D
Great chapter! :)
| RandomCuriosity519 chapter 19 . 12/21/2014
Well that was a big turn of events.
Taking a step back from the rest of the story I really liked the part with Yuki's ice sword following Orchid crushing the top half, it was written very skillfully, it gave me a very clear, and vivid image when I read it the way you wrote that piece *Round of appluase*
| Bastard From North chapter 18 . 11/17/2014
Orchid, you betrayed me :O
I though the guy was going to be good guy :(
So unfair :D But he has a giant sword :3
I wonder how long Yussel can keep that act up?
Knowing that some one is dead and people looking for that
guy... It can't be easy :/
( Didn't realize this was updated until now :D )
| RandomCuriosity519 chapter 18 . 11/16/2014
:( I already felt bad for Yuki, but now this, Orchid may not know who he is, but that would be downright terrifying
| RandomCuriosity519 chapter 17 . 11/14/2014
It's good that itzal's alive, I'm really excited to read more :)
| Bastard From North chapter 17 . 11/14/2014
Damn, I really need to do something with my memory xD
I can't remember surely who was who but what I think was going on
was that Itzal drank some water that made you immortal or cold dead corpse?
Well it seems he survived :D And the Zak was some suspicious snake boy :D
| Bastard From North chapter 16 . 9/3/2014
Ghassan kinda had it coming, like karma :P But hen again he was trying to fix things if I am right.
And dead can't talk or walk until the hell is full :D Or some one invents device how to bring back dead :P Good luck with that
I wonder how this turns out? :P
Sorry for late reviews, I was kinda lazy :D
| RandomCuriosity519 chapter 16 . 9/2/2014
Yuki writing those numbers in the phone book for Ghassan is going to be desperately sad later on... T.T
| Bastard From North chapter 15 . 8/17/2014
Yes, yes,very interesting chapter, yes indeed yes...
I am not sure why bot that Zak guy reminds me of snake :D Orochimaru?! It must be him! O.O
I think they shouldn't trust the man they just met with water in his pocket, that is an obvious pedophile :D
| RandomCuriosity519 chapter 15 . 8/16/2014
omg! I really hope Itzal doesn't die I think he'll be fine but there is no way to be sure...
Also I really like Zak you do a really good job at creating unique characters that stand out it's got me hooked on this story :D
| MysteriousFire chapter 14 . 4/26/2014
Ghassan is dead? No! He can't be dead! He must come to life again or something!
Itzal just accepting the fact that he'll be a usurper's side kick made me smile somehow xD
Erika! How can you run into that with your eyes wide open? :o
And Ghassan's alive again! Ow it's not him :( It's just a copy cat
Wait, if he's blind, how can he have seen Ghassan's face out by the mine?
Oh nice ending line of this chapter!
| Bastard From North chapter 14 . 4/13/2014
I would never want to live forever, it would just suck :/
I never understood why someone would want to anyway. But I guess you like cliffhangers don't you? :D
| RandomCuriosity519 chapter 14 . 4/12/2014
O_O what just happened? WHY DOES IT HAVE TO BE LIKE THIS?!
The bad guys are getting to large of a group AHHHHHHHHHHH! this is not good, not good at all...Does not compute does not compute XD
It's getting further into plot now, and i thought it was good before :D
Good work, hoping for the next chapter soon!
| MysteriousFire chapter 13 . 4/11/2014
And now he's lying to her to convince her to break up! This is sad :(
Why isn't he asking Ghassan about the accident in which his mother died? He could find out the truth! Then again, I disagree with the trance he put on Ghassan and the way he's using him!
He wants Ghassan to kill himself? He wants to take away Yuki and Mia's father? YUSSEL HOW DARE YOU?
Ghassan can resist? And is he dead now? Darn you phantom! Mayor cliffhanger!