|Reviews for Phantom's Story|
| Bastard From North chapter 11 . 3/1
I am not sure which is more scary, that some one is able to stop time or some one is able to control you :O And all of those have number in they're back :D
Really good chapter :)
| Bastard From North chapter 10 . 2/12
No! Why more secrets and the the chapter ends? Why every one tortures me with cliffhangers!? Why?
( In the fanfiction, one certain author had a habit to make nasty cliffhangers ) :D
I learned new word! :D Religious, I guess it means something about believing God or something?
Rena can stop time? That is really cool!
I wonder what Yuki thinks now :D
| Bastard From North chapter 9 . 2/2
Wait!? Why did the chapter end? Why there isn't more chapters!? Why there is a cliffhanger!?
Life is cruel -.- I just got in to this story then it ended :D
This story sure seems really interesting and I like already it :3
I'll be following this :) And really great work with this one :)
And sorry but this review is kinda rushed : /
| MysteriousFire chapter 9 . 1/31
I feel really sorry for Yuki at the beginning of this chapter :( Feeling like he might loose Yuuna, even though there was a chance for them to be together...
"This isn't some Disney movie" xD
She walked away? D: but but... :'(
All trees were gone? :o
Humans are funny creatures, I agree with Yuki.
Rena is kinda evil xD
Burn scars in the shape of numbers?
Yussel has powers? yay :D Story getting interesting! Now I'm curious...
| Not just Ordinary chapter 8 . 10/23/2013
Awwwww! It makes me want to cry! I love the story though. Can't really predict where it's headed, but that's what makes it so wonderful! I hate a predictable book...
| MysteriousFire chapter 8 . 10/19/2013
This secret remote area where Yuki sneaks off to... I have a feeling someone is going to be there who he doesn't expect to see...
He apologised for no reason... Is he British?
Yussel studies a lot it seems!
Yuki takes everything so seriously.
Aw Yuki is cute, wanting to be with her and no one else!
She never wrote back? She WHAT? How can you! Stupid girl. I actually liked you. But you wasted your chance.
| Unxious Custard chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
A trully brilliant opening sentence. I love the premise of this story, and also the dialogue between the two. I would have liked a little description of the superpowers given by the gems at their first mention. I like the ending too. Good story in the making.
| MysteriousFire chapter 7 . 9/12/2013
"Here's a hint, this is Biology class." I don't like the teacher -_-
He has always seen his powers as a burden until now? He has never thought of the possibilities?
Am I allowed to laugh when he turns his desk into ice? xD
"It makes me wonder how much of what we believe as fact today will be disproven a thousand or so many years from now." Hey I wonder about that too! I like this chemistry teacher now.
Yussel starts sounding like his father... about being forgotten and all.
Yuki reminds him of Caiden... actually that's good. He reminds him of his best friend who he killed over a couple of gems. Go ahead Ghassan. Feel guilty!
I wonder what will happen when Yuki finds out how his parents died. Does he know Ghassan is not his dad?
| MysteriousFire chapter 6 . 8/28/2013
Aw, it's sad when they tread you for what you are, not who you are
Unstable powers... upsetting make get dangerous... that sounds like James and Teresa now!
The murderer of his father is his stepdad now?
Also, I'm wondering how Yuuna (the names are so similar!) parents know so much about the powers...
| MysteriousFire chapter 5 . 8/23/2013
Excitement in his tone after finding out Ghassan is the killer?
I still can't figure Robert out...
"I don't want to kill too much of your time!" awesome Robert!
Lockpicking on an unlocked door, lol :D
Norbert holding a crystal... I have a feeling it's going to break!
Ghassan shouldn't kill himself! Okay, he's made a huge mistake, but he should accept it, admit it and live with it. Not run from it.
I love Susann's line aobut not forgetting the great memories!
Susann is dead? :o NO! And what happened to Ottilia and Norbert? How many magic powers did they get now? This is getting goooood!
| MysteriousFire chapter 4 . 5/11/2013
I liked the repeating the end of the last chapter in the beginning, because it helped me remember where this story ended last time!
I like how Ghassan wants Caiden to come back. It's sweet somehow.
"Any one of them could be the killer" you don't know how right you are Norbert... Ghassan must be feeling uncomfortable when he heard that.
Hahaha what is it with you and Monopoly? xD
"Some people are hard to figure out." That's very true!
You know, I recently watched Thor and Ghassan is really starting to remember me of Loki :P He feels guilty, he did bad things, but at the same time he does care.
"He'd find a way to play two roles, both her hurter and healer." For some reason I like that sentence.
I love Robert and Ghassan's talk! Especially how he random asked "Want a hug?" "No." made me laugh xD
"He sat up to get a better look at his friend." They did become friends rather quickly?
Now that's a cliffhanger! I wonder what Robert will do... Omg this is interesting I wanna read on you are torturing me! xD Okay while waiting for the next chapter I'm gonna write fanfiction about Phantom's Story in my head ;)
| VelvetyCheerio chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
I thought this first chapter was nice. It was interesting and Ghassan seems like the type to do evil things with his new powers. But hopefully not!
| ChibiJinchuuriki chapter 3 . 1/19/2013
Everyone's really supportive of Ottilia which is nice, but I'm wondering if Ghassan's going to be overcome with guilt one day, it seems like the guilt is already starting to get on his nerves :/
| Mylilblackpen chapter 3 . 1/18/2013
Oh Ghassan is a lowlife, I mean how can he just sit there and pretend like he hasn't just killed Caiden? I liked this chapter, very powerful. I did like the comparison Caiden as the hero and Ghassan playing the villain. I just feel sorry that Ghassan destroyed a family because of his greed; greed has a nasty way of destroying things. Poor Yuki and Ottilia. Great chapter, look forward to seeing this develop more.
| jakbnimble chapter 3 . 1/6/2013
Powerful chapter! I am so interested in Ghassan. Could this crime he's committed be changing him for the better? Maybe he'll spend his life trying to make it up to Ottilia and Yuki...