Reviews for Train Whistle
Oak Leaf Ninja chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
Awww... :/
Thespian Revolutionary chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
I decided to check out some of your stories/ poems, and I really liked this one. It was very beautiful. The ending especially.
Starry-eyed Starfish chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
I love how all of your poems tell a story :D
This one was really descriptive and insightful, with lots of interesting phrases used, like: "stained red from the tears they have cried" (( my favourite phrase :3 ))
I hope you keep writing because I enjoy reading your works :3
Sapphy-Sweets chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
A very unique point of view, your descriptions were very nicely done, an even balance that focused on everything. It gave the poem the mood of a short story, and vividness.