Reviews for I Can't Sleep
shelivestrapped chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
I love love love this! you write beautifully, and the way you leave it open, where there are so many possibilities! The fact that we don't know for sure who "he" is, or "her" or even what really happened, makse it a story that kind of haunts you. I literally read this two days ago and have been sitting in class trying to make coherent thoughts in order to review. Favorite Author for sure! Keep up the good work, don't let the world get you down, and post more for me to read!
livingspiritz1 chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
I love this poem.
AquariusGirl230191 chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
Great poem, wonderful imagery. I love how you kept the "it" bit without actually reffering to the act in question. I have an idea of what "it" is but it's better to be kept in the dark, questioning etc. Love it!

Well done