|Reviews for The reality of love|
| saamf 44 chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
I liked the last six or so lines the best; they flowed and were easy to understand. I had to read the first half more than once to understand it. If being vague was your intent (as it is with some poems), then success!:P
| Onearmwonder21 chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
Amazing poetry it is as if written by the ancients themselves.