|Reviews for Automated Response|
| Mystic Nite chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
Hey sorry its taken me sooo long to read this one but been busy lately, anyway I think this one is really interesting ( which is unusually for me as i usually prefer novel length narratives no offence) as you talk about something that people have a varied form of i.e a routine and see it from a different perspective. ( sorry gone a bit boring and dull on you there).
If you dont mind me asking was there a particular reason or inspiration behinde it?
| Alio Laski chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
This is so simple and so true. Very well-written! It read almost like poetry in some places. My only suggestion is maybe instead of using dashes in the lyrics, it would look better (and read better for people who don't know the song) if you just italicized them.