Reviews for Rach and Lucy
BexishDevil chapter 4 . 2/22/2013
I love the relationship between Lucy and Rachel :)
Carolina Martinez chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
Very funny and good. Still, try to add more description. Dialogue dominating everything in a story isn't very entertaining for the reader. :D Good job
China Cat Sunflower chapter 3 . 12/30/2012
I like where this is going. You must proceed forthwith.
My favorite line: "Lucy, everyone is crazy, I take you as seriously as possible and everyone is a joke."
I still like think "cool up" has a better ring to it than "coolio."
I'll give you a cameo in my story if you give me a cameo in yours.
SH26 chapter 3 . 11/14/2012
There were a few mistakes, but overall this chapter was funny, and gives you a look on how some things affect people.
Good Job!
Abigail Isabella chapter 2 . 11/9/2012
Oh, please do write some more! I'm enjoying this quite a bit!
haha! Well, happy writing!
lala land chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
"A master? Impressive."
good stuff bro, good stuff.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
'You are in a tree' omg I died that was really funny