Reviews for To Two Virgins
cherrycat chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
Again, you amaze me, Soph. This is really really good - publishing worthy. The tension here is really well put across, the rhyme system is great, and your imagery is INSANELY good, that ripeness of the fruit comparison is really great. There's a contrast here between innocence and non-innocence, I suppose, a sort of homage to the inbetween stage. This poem, sort of more than the others - although obviously they all do - feels really realistic and vivid, and while it's obviously sexual, it's not overtly so, and rather it's more... subtle, and well-worked. The what if-ness, that's not a word but I'm sure you know what I mean, the constant maybe refrain is really lovely, too. Stellar, honey, absolutely stellar - I'm jealous!
Violetviolence chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
SUCH SEXUAL TENSION, it literally made me sweat. *nosebleed!*